tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7559470046146049928.post3809765143422763684..comments2010-11-19T08:22:18.066-08:00Comments on Cross-hatched: hurryJessehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/08504145937846318485noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7559470046146049928.post-51524673556403785622010-11-19T08:22:18.066-08:002010-11-19T08:22:18.066-08:00Holly you're so right - I can't believe I ...Holly you're so right - I can't believe I didn't see that before. I was still unsatisfied with those last lines when I posted but your thought is the obvious answer now that I look again. For some reason I initially didn't like the rhyme scheme that would do but today when I look back at it, it fits. I'm going to modify it. :)Sarahhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12598559862646004257noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7559470046146049928.post-67458035070706056672010-11-18T20:46:25.266-08:002010-11-18T20:46:25.266-08:00I like this. I like your line-break choices--resul...I like this. I like your line-break choices--results in some interesting complexities of association.<br /><br />Although I think it might be more effective if it ended with "waste."<br /><br />Blah. Here I go sounding instructive. Like I know what I'm talking about...or as if anything I just said even sounds like it makes sense. Anyways, I liked it. Let's leave it at that. :)HSShttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09759367897044072974noreply@blogger.com